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Love by ~Tayeloquin:iconTayeloquin:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Love

I look into the water..
My friend..
It laughs..
It cries..
it knows my feelings.

I can see the moon
from where I sit..
It knows my secrets
and wishes
and hopes
from days long gone..

The stars..
they know whom I love..
He was written there..
An age ago..

The trees around me..
Are kind..
They brush my face
and wipe away the tears..

He knows,
He's there...

The water, the moon, the stars
and the trees....
©2007-2008 ~Tayeloquin
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Submitted: Oct 31, 2007
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written a long, long, long....very long time ago...

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~Hoshikage869:iconHoshikage869: Nov 3, 2007, 5:25:24 PM
its beautiful

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*projective vomits blood*
~Tayeloquin:iconTayeloquin: Nov 3, 2007, 5:27:34 PM
:hug:

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The stars..
they know whom I love..
He was written there..
An age ago..

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Full version of poem: [link]
~kairi007:iconkairi007: Jan 15, 2008, 9:57:40 PM Mood: Amazed
I like it alot!!!!!!! favorite

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What`s up!!!! *sighs* Just the ceiling
~Tayeloquin:iconTayeloquin: Jan 15, 2008, 9:59:09 PM
Thanks!!

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The stars..
they know whom I love..
He was written there..
An age ago..

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Full version of poem: [link]
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